I see a kid,
eyes filled with dreams,
He got a lot to scream,
But it hardly seems.

His introvert silence,
People misunderstand,
His age is 10  but he is a mature man,
Yet his identity is only a lad,
People tryin a trick him and term him mad.

I’ve seen him as an astronaut,
Seen him as a cricketer,
Seen him as a rockstar,
A bloody dream predatator.

Now he have turn 20,
Been a compress file ,
His dreams appears like,
They’ve went to exile.

But the fire of the heart,
Has not been meed,
Hence a blow of air
All what he need.

ADITYA SHRIVASTAVA

33 responses to “Dilemma of dreams”

  1. creative guy👍, awesome n impressive poem, ol d best and keeping giving many more such creativities👏👏👏👏👌

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    1. Thank you sakshi for ur positive feedback.
      Will surely keep up this work.
      Thanks you read it.

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  2. Thank you sakshi for ur positive feedback.
    Will surely keep up this work.
    Thanks you read it.

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  3. Beautifully presented ….The way you wrote about his dreams and their not being accomplished. ..splendid. …great work aadi. .keep going. ..appreciable writing. .

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    1. Thank you saba.
      Or usne hope chodi nahi hai poem me.
      If u see the last para

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  4. Beautifully written #aadi ..!!
    So so true and realistic .

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    1. Thank you very much afreen .

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  5. Shubham Sharma Avatar
    Shubham Sharma

    Nice work Aadi…. Deep thinking capacity bro…

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    shubham sharma

    Nice work Aadi… Deep thinking capacity bro… And amazing use of words…

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  7. Rishabh Singh Mandloi Avatar
    Rishabh Singh Mandloi

    Aur kon kon se talent he tum me ,,, wo Bhi bata do ,, bhaut badiya likha bhai , touching deep down in everyone’s heart.

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    1. Kuch talent walent nahi yrr 😀
      Pr thanks 🙂

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  8. Abhishek Singh Jadon Avatar
    Abhishek Singh Jadon

    Great job buddy….. keep it up… 🙂

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    1. Thanks abhishek bhai.. 🙂

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  9. रामकिशोर श्रीवास्तव"रवि" Avatar
    रामकिशोर श्रीवास्तव”रवि”

    आदित्य अच्छी poem है।परंतु हिन्दी में भी लिखोगे तो बेहतर रहेगा।शुभकामनाएं।

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    1. thank you mama ji😆😆 ..

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  10. Gud aditya nice creativity…. I m proud of ur creative mind…

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    1. thank you doctor mini 😆😆😆😆

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  11. Anuj Billaiya Avatar
    Anuj Billaiya

    Life is unpredictable but awesome poem aadi dude keep it up.
    I hope to see more creativity like this in your upcommings….

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    1. thank you anuj.. 😆😆😆

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  12. Pranay shrivastava Avatar
    Pranay shrivastava

    Good going,keep it up …

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  13. Bohot ache bawaa! Keep up the good work.. 👍✌

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  14. future poet 😻Good work!!!

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  15. SHASHANK VISHWAKARMA Avatar
    SHASHANK VISHWAKARMA

    Good job boy…and all the best for further future poems..

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  16. great poem, great author n a great line “A bloody dream predatator”….

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  17. Great😊 Seems like the poem version of that song “jeene do” by the movie 3 idiots lol😂😂 just kidding lol…. Great work😊

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