1. Adore – to love with entire heart
2. Pave – to cover
3. Cloud 9 – state of happiness
4. Summon – to order

POEM –

A girl with rosy face,
And straight hair,
When I looked her on the first date,
The love was in the air.

Long chats, short calls,
I’m feeding my self with this,
The day she was on my back seat(back seat of bike),
OH! God that was a bliss.

She said she loves me,
I said I love you more,
Beauty of the world reside on her face,
I gotta need her to adore.          

With her one smile my sorrow drains,
Which I use to pave,
I say , Madam you are my Master,
And I’m your slave.

With the glory you have,
You stood with me in the crowd,
That took me on cloud 9,
You made me really proud.

To tell my real feel for you,
Words are getting shrink,
My world turns into heaven,
When you’re here in a blink.

The one whom I love,
Yes you are the one,
I’ll be their to your service,
Baby, whenever you’ll summon.

I know you go through tough times,
I know you got the goal,
Rest all might lose faith in you,
But I know you’ll make it all.

Time which I spend with you,
It runs like the sand from hand,
I’ve been in love with you,
The day since I’ve seen that “Pink hair band”.

Aditya Shrivastava

About the poem –
This is very special for me and I believe its one of my best creation so far, hope you people have enjoyed it.
Please share your views on comment section.

Thanks

51 responses to “Pink hair band”

  1. Mohammad Hasnain Avatar
    Mohammad Hasnain

    Gr8 work bro… U r doing awesome in this field also..n I think this poem can b used as a weapon of love by every bf in d world…gud job…god bless n all the best for ur upcoming writings…

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    1. Thanks hasnain 😊 for your love and kind words..

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    2. Aapne use ki 🤐

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  2. Awsome…aditya….
    Keep it up….👌👍
    Waitng for ur nxt poem….

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  3. The one for whom this poem is being composed is really very lucky, for me this was your best till now, really loved it… keep giving such awesome compositions to us😊, proud of you aadi😘

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    1. Thank you very much sakshi

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  4. Great title and Great lines…….and thoughts you put in it………

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    1. thank you arth 😊😊😊

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  5. Awsome aditya …keep it 👌👍👏
    Waitng for ur nxt poem…..

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  6. Awesome Aditya…..i really liked this poem….the way you described the things are too touching…….keep it up.Really appreciate your work and efforts…….

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    1. thanks naved bhai 😊😊😊

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  7. Abhishek Singh Jadon Avatar
    Abhishek Singh Jadon

    Keep it up bro….m spellbounded…
    Kisko dimaag mein rkh ke likhi hai wo bhi bata de 😂

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    1. Thanks abhishek bhai 😊😊😊
      I think jisko dimag me rakhkr likhi hai sirf usi ko pata rehne do.
      actually dimag me nahi dil me rakh kr likhi hai 😀

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  8. Nice work dude!
    Just in 7th part it should be “there”

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    1. thanks for the review brother , I’ll fix it

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  9. awsm wrk done adi 😊 i didn’t knew u write so well 👍
    such a gd poem nd that’pink hair band’ grl is really vryy luckyy 🙂

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    1. Thank u very much rimsha 😊😊

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  10. i think this poem is for someone special …………… she is lukkyyyyyyyy……

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  11. Very beautifully expressed. Precisely articulated every moment. Nicee 😄👌

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    1. Thank you devyani 😊😊

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  12. Great work bro you can make it big. 😎😃

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  13. U nailed it aditya!! I’ve been reading your blogs but this one is the best ..keep up the good work!!

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    1. hey thanks nimisha 😊😊

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  14. Beautifully expressed
    Nicely written …
    .. Waiting for more exciting poems . All the best 😊😊

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  15. She is one lucky girl i must say !!! 😉

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  16. Beautiful and youthful…. Heart poured out pretty well… Keep d good wrk up dude. 😃😃👌👍

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  17. Priyanka Mewada Avatar
    Priyanka Mewada

    Beautifully expressed ..

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  18. Oh my god. ….aadi u say this is one of your best work but I would this is one of the best peice I read. .greatly moved. …beautifully picturised. …intelligent use of words. ..really appreciable. ..keep going. …A perfect 10 for this one. .

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    1. Thank you very much saba…
      I really appreciate your kind words for my little piece of work.
      and yeah this poem was really special for me.

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  19. Great work bhai. You really have good writing skills 🙂

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    1. Thanks bhai thank you 😊😊

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  20. U doing a great job …another good treat from your side ..seeking for more 👏👏

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  21. Great job man!!..another good treat from your side …seeking for more 👏👏

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  22. Again a nice work, keep the good work up,
    Your writings could become a useful weapon of yours, resource your work to some publication when you think it’s time.

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  23. Rishabh Singh Mandloi Avatar
    Rishabh Singh Mandloi

    Lovely,intimate close to your heart i like it, quite a poem .

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  24. You nailed it!! Good work aditya.. Wayy to go man! All luck to you! 😍😍

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  25. This 1 was really too gud 👌👌👌 great job aditya !..😍😍😍

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  26. this is really really the most beautiful thing I’m coming across… it actually describes everything deeply and one single word of this poem is realistic… it actually made me wander around my sweetest times and memories! wonderful work done by you #aadi and keep putting a rush of adrenaline in reader’s body !!
    I LOVED IT

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  27. Damn!!
    I am ur classmate since last 2 years how am i unable to uncover or see such a talent lurking besides me .
    Such a wonderful piece of artwork not only the sole purpose of poem but the selection of words are par genius

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  28. Dude it was good.. Sorry bohot time baad padhi..😛 But it was worth it. Good going brother! Keep up the good work! 😘

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  29. Not a single effort of yours will go in vain. You will be rewarded for your pain. Your hard work will bring you a lot of gain, so keep going one day you will be on great heights.
    Nice poem i like the way you described the beauty of a girl..
    Waiting for another!!!

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  30. Mansi Shrivastava Avatar
    Mansi Shrivastava

    👌👌👌👌 M spell bounded bhai…keep it up…😍😍…really appreciate ur work n efforts…😰😰…. Loved it…..😘😘😘…… Go ahead n achieve grt heights…..👍

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  31. I could feel the emotions pouring in every line! brilliant dude! Keep going! All the Best!

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  32. It’s sooo sweet
    😍

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  33. Ishan Shrivastava Avatar
    Ishan Shrivastava

    welldone aditya…..very well expressed, nice blog….
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    https://breadomlette.wordpress.com/ and give your valuable comments and likes, don’t forget to follow….

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