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On the scooter of my father,
Moving to the bus stop,
Conceiving the image of dispersal,
I’m moving to my school.

Threat of uncompleted homework,
With the image of my headmaster in mind,
Expecting him to be kind,
I’m moving to my school.

Standing on the bus stop,
Bag on my back,
Hoping the bus won’t come today,
I’m moving to my school.

None of my day-dream coming into existence,
Loosing all my patience,
Stepping inside the bus,
Gosh ! I’m moving to my school.

Leaving the surroundings behind,
Imagining something beyond criticalness of mind,
Hoping that bus won’t stop today,
I’m moving to my school.

Where good morning ! chorus is mandate,
Punishment for being late,
Can’t even manage to sit with my mate,
Why the hell I’m in school.

Looking at my bournvita clock,
Hoping that this period will stop,
Rigorously watching the countdown,
Somebody please shut the school.

Dispersal bell is the lovely sound,
Managing a line for bus is hardly found,
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With anxiety to execute plan to kill dragon in video game,
Yeah ! I’m leaving back the school.

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ADITYA SHRIVASTAVA


About the poem :

This poem tells the feeling of a kindergarten kid, who is not willing to leave his video game and comfort zone behind for sake of going school.

Poem shows how chronologically event occurs from his home to bus stop,
On bus stop, through the way to the school , in the school , till the final dispersal bell.

Hope you’ve enjoyed it.
Please comment , your review matters.

28 responses to “A Kindergarten Kid”

  1. superb 👌, every student might have experienced this and will surely like your poem adi😊

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    1. Thank you very much sakshi.
      You have always been a grt support. 😊

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  2. Pranay Prasad Avatar
    Pranay Prasad

    Very well written ! 😀

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  3. shubham sharma Avatar
    shubham sharma

    Bhai yar aaddi ye same story h jab mein 6th standard mein tha mera v esa hi hall tha …. Tune bs words k combination amazing kiya yaar… 😆😁

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    1. Thanks shubham.
      teri hee nahi , ye poem har bachhe k story keh rahi h i hope.

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  4. this left me nostalgic…. keep up d good work..!

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  5. Rishabh Singh Mandloi Avatar
    Rishabh Singh Mandloi

    Wo yaad budhi ka office room usko Bhi mention kkrta.,.

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  6. Rishabh Singh Mandloi Avatar
    Rishabh Singh Mandloi

    Bhudhhi Bhi hasi thi office me USS din😂😂😂😂😂

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    1. bhai wo KG kid k kahani hai na..
      islye ni kara.
      is KG kid ko agli poem me bada kr dunga.
      tb aaega us ka zikr 😀😀😀

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  7. This makes me memorize my school days .. cherish all the memories once again !!!

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    1. 😊😊😊 Thanks Afreen.
      This is a grt compliment for any Writer or poet.
      If he’s able to take his reader back in time.

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  8. Nice work Adi, nicely framed the actual events taking place in any child,
    Hope to see your book as the best seller soon😌😌

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    1. hahahahaha sure brother 😀😀😀😀

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  9. Gud 1 rishi….I believe these r the words given to every child’s eternal feelings while going to school…reading ur poem I can recall all d memories back…gud work ..keep it up

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    1. Thank you very much didi.
      This is a grt complement for me.
      Because if i could give words to someone’s feeling , then it is best thing i can be as a writer.

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  10. Abhishek Singh Jadon Avatar
    Abhishek Singh Jadon

    Nice one broda……and pls don’t take manish srsly he is just taking revenge of what we did to him on comment his profile picture…..and gud one aadi bhai

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    1. hahahaha really?
      any ways thanks for the complement brother. 😀😊

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  11. Awesome work aditya

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  12. Brilliant! I had flashbacks of my kindergarten days reading this poem! Nice work!

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  13. U are an amazing poem writter .. 👍awesome lines n keep writting 😊😊👌👌

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  14. great work!! waiting for few more 🙂 🙂 (Y)

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  15. Superbly awesome 😉 😃

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  16. Very true every1 has experienced this very nice!!
    🙂 🙂

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